Saturday, March 8, 2008

A Letter to God

A Letter to God
Gregorio Lopez y Fuentes
Translated by Donald A. Yates

The house – the only one in the entire valley – sat on the crest of a low hill. From this height one could se the river and, next to the corral, the field of ripe corn dotted with the kidney bean flowers that always promised a good harvest.
The only thing the earth needed was a rainfall, or at least a shower. Throughout the morning Lencho – who knew his fields intimately – had done nothing else but scan the sky toward the northeast.
“Now we’re really going to get some water, woman.”
The woman, who was preparing supper, replied: “Yes, God willing.”
The oldest boys were working in the field, while the smaller ones were playing near the house, until the woman called to them all: “Come for dinner…”
It was during the meal that, just as Lencho had predicted, big drips of rain began to fall. In the northeast huge mountains of clouds could be seen approaching. The air was fresh and sweet.
The man went out to look for something in the corral for no other reason than to allow himself the pleasure of feeling the rain on his body, and when he returned he exclaimed: “those aren’t raindrops falling from the sky, they’re new coins. The big drops are ten-centavo pieces and the little ones are fives…”
With a satisfied expression he regarded the field of ripe corn with its kidney bean flowers, draped in a curtain of rain. But suddenly a strong wind began to fall. These truly did resemble new silver coins. The boys, exposing themselves to the rain, ran out to collect the frozen pearls.
“It’s really getting bad now,” exclaimed the man, mortified. “I hope it passes quickly.”
It did not pass quickly. For an hour the hail rained on the house, the garden, the hillside, the cornfield, on the whole valley. The field was white, as if covered with salt. Not a leaf remained on the trees. The corn was totally destroyed. The flowers were gone from the kidney bean plants. Lencho’s soul was filled with sadness. When the storm had passed, he stood in the middle of the field and said to his sons: “A plague of locusts would have left more than this… the hail has left nothing: this year we will have no corn or beans…”
That night was a sorrowful one: “All our work, for nothing!”
“There’s no one who can help us!”
But in the hears of all who lived in that solitary house in the middle of the valley, there was a single hope: help from God.
“Don’t be so upset, even though this seems like a total loss. Remember, no one dies of hunger!”
“That’s what they say: no one dies of hunger….”
All through the night, Lencho thought only of his one hoe: the help of God, whose eyes, as he had been instructed, see everything, even what is deep in one’s conscience.
Lencho was an ox of a man, working like an animal in the fields, but still he knew how to write. The following Sunday, at day break, after having convinced, himself that there is a protecting spirit he bgan to write a letter which he himself would carry to town and place in the mail.
It was nothing less than a letter to God.
“God,” he wrote, “if you don’t help me, my family and I will go hungry this year. I need a hundred pesos in order to resow the field and to live until the crop comes, because the hailstorm…”
He wrote “To God” on the envelope, put the letter inside and, still troubled, went to town. At the post office he placed a stamp on the letter and dropped it into the mailbox.
One of the employees, who was a postman and also helped at the post officer, went to his boss, laughing heartily and showed him the letter to God. Never in his career as a postman had he known that address. The postmaster – a fat amiable fellow – also broke out laughing, but almost immediately he turned serious and, tapping the letter on his desk, commented: “what faith! I wish I had the faith of the man who wrote this letter. To believe the way he believes. To hope with the confidence that he knows how to hope with. Starting up a correspondence with God!”
So, in order not to disillusion that prodigy of faith, revealed by a letter that could not be delivered, the postmaster cmae up with an idea: answer the letter. But when he opened it, it was evident that to answer it he needed something more than good will, ink and paper. But he stuck to his resolution: he asked for money from his employee, he himself gave part of his salary, and several friends of his were obliged to give something “for an act of charity”.
It was impossible for him to gather together the hundred pesos requested by Lencho, so he was able to send the farmer only a little more than half. He put the bills in an envelope addressed to Lencho and with them a letter containing only a signature:

The following Sunday Lencho came a bit earlier than usual to ask if there was a letter for him. It was the postman himself who handed the letter to him, while the postmaster, experiencing the contentment of a man who ahs performed a good deed, looked on from the doorway of his office.
Lencho showed not the slightest surprise on seeing the bills – such was his confidence – but he became angry when he counted the money. God could not have made a mistake, nor could he have denied Lencho what he had requested!
Immediately, Lencho went up to the window to ask for paper and ink. On the public writing table, he started to write with much wrinkling of his brow, caused by the effort he had to make to express his ideas. When he finished, he went to the window to buy a stamp, which he licked and then affixed to the envelope with a blow of his fist.
The moment that the letter fell into the mailbox the postmaster went to open it. It said;
“God: Of the money that I asked for only seventy pesos reached me. Send me the rest, since I need it very much. But don’t send it to me through the mail, because the post office employees are a bunch of crooks. Lencho.”


Anonymous said...

Nice one.thank you guys..I lough at is indeed a very rich piece, a reflective one. God Bless you guys..

finah said...

Very funny! Indeed a rich one!

shishir manral said...

i read it the first time when i was in 11th after reading it again all those past memories flashed in my mind....i connect a lot with this story as i too have a lot of faith in god..

jylyre said...

i think in the second letter it is seven hundred it is not seventy

Kumar Bruce said...

Really a good story depicting the contradiction of life.

Asad Khan said...

what is the moral this lesson a letter to god?

Neha Kaura said...

moral:- 1)faith of the farmer in God.
2) a negative moral is:- farmer was not a fighter who could try something else to overcome the situation.


The guy above this comment is a bum

Dilshad Singh said...

This story was in my class 10 English syllabus in 2003-04.
I read it after 11 years still remembered the last line.

Aayush Nehra said...

Please replace the word hoe with hope in the text above

paramvir singh said...

A very nice story .

UNKNOWN said...

Not a bad story i like it

Waffle clickbait said...

100% gr8 story. loved the romance between lencho and the postman. i thought the part with the sorcerer was a bit out there but tied in well after the dragon battle climax

Unknown said...

The end was an emotional roller coaster ride, I laughed, cried, defecated and called my mom. Masterpiece.

Unknown said...

Faith in God they will make all thinks correct

manas ranjan das said...

I really enjoyed this lesson. It was very funny. One could understand if one read this book it was nice One -from -Barsha priyadarshini das . Class -10th . Palasuni. Bhubaneswar odisha.

Unknown said...

God helps us with his own ways,but even we are thankless what he has blessed

Unknown said...

Wow,how'd I miss that.

Unknown said...

What was a problem faced by the character/s in the story

Raman Dixit said...

Nice one

Raman Dixit said...

Many many mistakes are present

Unknown said...

How could you like to end the chapter

Unknown said...

why did postmaster helped lencho ? what did he say after receiving money?

Unknown said...

What is critique style use in the story?

Son of God said...

This boy have a faith to God .Impossible things was become possible with God, even God did not gave exactly what he want, but God prepares more than he want .

Unknown said...

What would be a suitable ending o the story from your side?

Dr.Alan sajith said...


This is one of the sweetest as well as a humorous story.
In my perspective there are people who doesnt know that people
themselves are considered as GODS.You dont need to search for god, when it is in you

Unknown said...

God is my favorite.